A written homepage teardown in 48 hours

Turn more website visitors into customers.

Get a clear, expert review of the homepage you have now. I’ll show you where visitors get lost, rewrite the copy that needs help, and give you the exact fixes to make first.

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Say what changes for the customer, not what you call yourself.
Too vague
Make the next step obvious
Your homepage has one job

Make the next step feel obvious.

When the message is vague, the proof is buried, or the offer takes too long to understand, good visitors leave. More traffic will not fix a homepage that loses people on arrival.

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Visitors cannot tell what you sell.

Your team understands the business. A new visitor only has a few seconds to catch up.

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Your best proof is easy to miss.

Strong results and happy customers do not help if the page hides them below vague claims.

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The next step asks people to guess.

Competing calls to action and unclear offers create hesitation right when you need momentum.

Stop sending more traffic into a page that may be leaking customers. Find the leaks for $249

Here’s what you get.

A clear, practical PDF with annotated screenshots, rewritten headlines, and five prioritized fixes you can put to work right away.

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Annotated screenshots

See the friction, confusion, and missed opportunities directly on your pages. No guessing which section I mean.

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Rewritten headlines

I will not just tell you the copy is weak. I will rewrite the most important headlines so you can see a stronger direction.

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Five fixes, in order

A prioritized punch list of the five changes most likely to improve clarity, trust, and conversion.

See the problems, understand the stakes, and know exactly what to change. Get your teardown

Three simple steps.

No discovery call and no scheduling puzzle. Checkout takes a couple of minutes. Then I do the thinking and send you a plan you can put to work.

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Order

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Checkout securely through Stripe. Add your website URL in the required field so I know exactly where to start.

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Review

I tear it down

I review the homepage, message, offer, calls to action, trust signals, and the path toward conversion.

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Deliver

Your PDF hits your inbox

I email your written teardown as a PDF within 48 hours, with screenshots, rewrites, and your five highest-impact fixes.

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Sample teardown: Freshworks

Here is one finding from a full sample report. It shows how a strong company can still make its homepage story clearer, tighter, and easier to act on.

This is an independent sample. Freshworks did not request it and is not affiliated with this offer.

Sample reportFreshworks
Homepage
The one-line verdict

Freshworks has serious proof and a broad product ecosystem. The homepage just makes a new visitor work too hard to understand the offer and connect the story.

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Clarity

The headline sounds important, but it does not explain the product.

Freshworks homepage hero with an annotation marking the headline Turn operational complexity into coordinated action
The main headline leads with corporate language instead of a plain description of the software.
The problem

“Turn operational complexity into coordinated action” could describe consulting, logistics, or project management. A first-time visitor cannot tell this is IT service and customer support software.

Why it hurts

The visitor has to decode the line before deciding whether Freshworks is relevant. That slows down the page when clarity matters most.

The exact fix

Lead with the category and the outcome. Three plain-language directions:

IT service and customer support software that helps teams resolve issues faster.
Make IT service and customer support simpler for every team.
Help employees and customers get answers faster.
Keep reading

See the complete Freshworks sample with the full set of findings, rewrites, and a prioritized action plan.

Download the full sample teardown (PDF)
The lens I use

Good design is not enough.

A website has a job. It should help the right person understand the value, trust the business, and take the next step.

ClarityCan the right buyer understand what you do in seconds?
PositioningIs there a real reason to choose you instead of the alternatives?
OfferIs the value clear enough to make the next step feel worth it?
TrustDoes the page prove the claims it makes?
ConversionIs the path forward obvious and low-friction?
One clear price

A sharp second opinion without the agency engagement.

Perfect if you know your website could work harder, but you do not need a months-long strategy process to understand the first moves.

  • Homepage and funnel review
  • Annotated screenshots
  • Key headline rewrites
  • Five prioritized fixes
  • PDF by email within 48 hours
  • Written, not video
One-time price
$249
PDF delivered by email within 48 hours.
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Chris Small, fractional CMO and marketing operator
Chris Small
Written by Chris Small

A marketing operator, not a drive-by critic.

I am a fractional CMO who helped scale a company from $0 to more than $10M in annual recurring revenue. Since then, I have helped dozens of businesses build practical revenue engines of their own.

I have spent years working on positioning, acquisition, conversion, and the systems that turn attention into revenue. This teardown gives you the same kind of direct, commercially minded feedback I bring to larger consulting engagements, packaged into a fast written review.

$0 to $10M+ ARRHelped build the revenue engine behind that growth
Dozens of businessesRevenue strategy across SaaS, services, and creator companies

Before you order.

The practical details, from timing to what lands in your inbox.

Your completed teardown is delivered as a PDF by email within 48 hours of checkout. Stripe collects your website URL in a required field so I can get started without a follow-up form.
That is completely fine. The review is about clarity, trust, and conversion, not judging your taste. A rough or early site can be especially useful to review before you spend more time polishing the wrong things.
No. Enter your website URL at checkout and I will take it from there. The teardown is intentionally written so you can review it on your schedule and share it with your team.
A designed PDF with annotated screenshots, clear explanations of what is hurting the page, implementation-ready headline rewrites, and five prioritized fixes. Each finding explains the problem, why it matters, and exactly what to change.
I start with the homepage, then follow the main conversion path a prospect would take. That may include a service page, pricing page, booking flow, lead form, or another key step connected to the homepage.
Implementation is not included. The teardown shows you what to change and why, with copy you can use and a clear order of operations.
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